Wikipedia:Peer review/Tampon/archive1

Tampon

This is the first article that I've written/destubbified here, and I'd like feedback. I'm particularly interested in whether other folks think I maintained NPOV in the section on alternatives. The citation styles for the references also had me a bit kerfuffled, so I'd appreciate your thoughts on that, too.

Posted by: Thalia/Karen 06:55, Dec 14, 2003 (UTC)

It looks to me like you did a very good job. I hesitated for a moment as to whether I agreed that genetically modified cotton could be seen as an environmental concern, but I quickly came around to your point of view. Jack 09:13, 14 Dec 2003 (UTC)

I gave it a bit of copy edit and formatting. Looks good to me, though the links probably need formatting. What about the link between dioxins and cancer--should that be mentioned here? heidimo 02:39, 9 Mar 2004 (UTC)