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Casualties in the U.S.-led invasion and occupation of Iraq

I think this could be a featured article at some point: too often, when this subject arises, someone will briefly refer to one selected aspect of the issue as if it was the only aspect worth mentioning. This article is the only treatment I've seen that gives a comprehensive, neutral overview of all aspects. Now, I think it could use some review for POV, etc. (See the questions at the end of its Discussion page.) Thanks! Neow 18:47, Aug 17, 2004 (UTC)

• A few issues: 1. The "who is to blame" section doesn't seem to add anything to the article, and is full of weasel words and/or POV. I'd remove it. 2. No definition is given for "civilian"--is there a distinction between a Sadr militiaman and a collateral damage victim? How is that distinction made? Other than that, not bad. [[User:Meelar|Meelar (talk)]] 19:43, 2004 Aug 18 (UTC)
• Arlo Guthrie "...they fly them in at midnight and unload the body sacks..."