Wikipedia:Peer review/Crime fiction/archive1

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Crime fiction[edit]

I happened to find Crime fiction in Pages needing attention list. It is an extremely well-written article, which has a potential of becoming an example prose. Unfortunately, it is currently very unwieldy, and too lengthy. As a minimum startup effort, I managed to categorise the entire article under meaningful sections, and make it "look" at least "cosmetically appealing". I also moved a few pages to new and existing articles (Locked room mystery,The Hollow Man etc.) and added appropriate links. As far as I am aware, I have not DELETED CONTENT in a way that affects the flow of the article.

The still remaining flaws of the article I observe are - It looks POV-ed (though it is not, exactly. With minimal rephrasing (removing "You would notice"s and "Please note that"s), it will look better) and its size. I invite wikipedians to suggest/make the appropriate changes. As a final step, this article may need to be split up into smaller articles, combined under one heading.