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Gary Sheffield[edit]

Can somebody review this article, its kind of boring. Its mostly about his career highlights and things like that.

There's a lot of good info there. Have you thought about breaking it up in sections by season, maybe? Also, you probably don't have to use "Gary Sheffield" and "Gary" as much--you can use the pronoun almost all the time. That will make it read a bit more smoothly. Looks good. P. RIIS 16:58, 29 Oct 2004 (UTC)
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